Final Draft...Draft.

Me, right now.  

Thanks to some great suggestions made by Charly, and reading my last draft aloud, I've completely reorganized my paper.  Deconstructed and reconstructed.  Or...just constructed?

I don't know.

But.  I'm going to finish up with the last point and conclusion tomorrow, when my battery and brain aren't dead.  Here's the link to what has come about thus far.

I haven't even done basic editing yet, but I'm quite thrilled with the direction it has taken in the past 24 hours(!), thanks to suggestions from friends, family, and peers(!).  Thanks a million, everyone that has helped me thus far.